A very literary (and tasty!) east coast trip

Oh, my–almost two weeks have passed since my trip ended. I’d better get this post up, huh? 🙂

I left Colorado just in time to escape 98-degree, bone-dry days and the worst of the wildfires, and flew into NYC just in time to catch 98-degree, 100%-humidity days that made me feel like I was back in the rainforest. A really loud, crowded rainforest that smelled like rotting garbage.

My first literary destination was KGB Bar, where my good friend E.C. Myers packed the house for his reading from Fair Coin. Standing room only! If I ever do a public reading, I can only hope to be half as funny and engaging as he was.

The next day, I headed down to Soho for a get-to-know-you-in-person lunch with Gladys Gatsby‘s lovely editor, Shauna Fay Rossano. We had e-mailed and talked on the phone several times, but this would be our first face-to-face meeting. She gave me a choice of restaurants, each with a more fabulous-sounding menu than the next, and I was having quite a time choosing, but I finally went with this one……because the NY Times hinted that they might just have the best pie in the city. Total scale-tipper. Also, when I asked Shauna if she wanted to split a slice and she immediately proposed we get the peanut butter pie, I knew I was working with the smartest editor in town. 🙂

Yes, I remembered to take a picture of the pie, but somehow forgot to get a picture of me and Shauna at lunch. D’oh! But there would be a chance to remedy that later. In the meantime, we parted ways, and I took a wander through Soho. Here’s a sign I enjoyed in the window of the McNally Jackson bookstore.

A weekend went by. I spent time with family, visited friends, went to a wedding.

But then Monday found me and Andy venturing out to Flushing, where we had somehow convinced Shauna and her husband to meet us at Fu Run, a restaurant specializing in the “Dongbei” cuisine of northeast China. We chowed down on dishes like the “Muslim lamb chop” (not a chop, but actually an amazing rack cumin-crusted lamb ribs) and “green bean sheet jelly” (actually a spicy cold noodle dish). Of course, I needed to get a glamour shot of the lamb ribs…and luckily remembered to pose with Shauna in the same picture!A few days later, I spent the day at Coney Island with my sister. We rode the Wonder Wheel and got hot dogs from the original Nathans and spent hours watching walruses play at the aquarium. I took lots of atmospheric pictures, since I’m planning to set a scene at Coney Island if I ever write a Gladys sequel!

Brooke and I also took some fittingly old-timey self portraits, thanks to the magic of Instagram.

At the end of the day, we wandered over to Brighton Beach to eat delicious potato/mushroom- and meat-stuffed vareniki (Ukranian dumplings) at Cafe Glechik. I had read somewhere online that a $7 order came with more than 20 vareniki, but I didn’t believe it until they were right in front of me. SO. GOOD.Fast forward a few days and a Megabus ride, and I found myself in Boston, ready to have my second literary power lunch of the trip–with my awesome agent, Ammi-Joan Paquette! Stupidly, I had so much fun hanging out with Joan that I forgot to get a picture either of the food (a delicious date-and-mascarpone “pizza”) or of the people. All I’ve got is this exterior shot of the restaurant in Harvard Square (in fact, the only photo I took the entire three days I spent in Boston, despite seeing many old friends and engaging in fun activities like kayaking on the Charles.).But I made up for that by taking plenty of pictures during the next part of my trip, a swing through New Hampshire and Vermont. The sole purpose of this leg was to finally meet my critique partner extraordinaire, Ann Bedichek, in person! Here we are with an order of garlic knots at Ramuntos in Hanover, NH–which make a greasy, delicious cameo in Ann’s middle-grade manuscript Scientastic Supergirls.The fact that Ann and I were only just meeting in person that day was kind of ridiculous if you know our history, which includes graduating the same year from the same college, where we apparently had a slew of mutual friends and Ann did the same three-month foreign study program as my future husband. Three years ago, Andy and I got married a few miles from where Ann and her husband live, and last summer we were all at our 10-year college reunion…and yet Ann and I still managed not to cross paths in life until we entered the same pitch contest last fall and ended up connecting online as writers.

Lo and behold, now she’s my number-one beta reader and we’re agency-sisters…so it seems that we finally got the memo that the universe want us to be friends. 🙂

Anyway, I was lucky enough to spend my final weekend on the east coast hanging out at Ann and Dan’s house, picking herbs at the local farm with their adorable son Ethan, drinking chocolate frappes at LA Burdick, and taking a dip at my favorite wedding venue, Alyson’s Orchard.

How can you not be happy when you’re sitting on a dock, listening to the frogs sing, on a beautiful pond in New Hampshire?Let’s leave it there. Sure, there was a long train ride, and a few more days spent in New York, but I think I’ve shared most of the important parts. I was happy to go back east, to reunite with family and friends and meet some amazing new people. But I’m happy to be home now, too, where the mountains tower outside my window, I pass deer and prairie dogs on my bike ride to work, and most days I have the time and calm to get some writing done.

(I do wish we had better vareniki here, though.)


Launch week for Flying the Dragon!

Just a quick note to say that it’s now officially LAUNCH WEEK (woohoo!) for my friend and agency-mate Natalie Dias Lorenzi‘s lovely middle-grade book, Flying the Dragon, over at the EMU’s Debuts blog. Today I have coauthored a post with another writer named Tara, in which we interview editor Emily Mitchell and agent Erin Murphy and give away a signed copy of the book. Come check it out! (And come back every day this week–we’ll have new posts up daily to celebrate this book’s release.)

If you’d like to know more about the book before you leave this page, here’s my review from Goodreads:

Flying the DragonFlying the Dragon by Natalie Dias Lorenzi

My rating: 5 of 5 stars

Every time the characters in this book had a meal, I got hungry for Japanese food–to the point where I actually ran down to the Asian grocery store for ingredients and made myself some yakisoba. =)

More seriously, this was a lovely, sweet read about the challenges of trying to live between two cultures. The two main characters, Japanese Hiroshi and his American cousin Skye, were so easy to connect to; you could really feel their frustration as they tried to learn each others’ languages and as Hiroshi struggled to adapt to life in America. The author did a terrific job of making the most mundane American actions–like eating spaghetti with a fork, or calling a teacher by her last name–feel foreign to Hiroshi. And when Hiroshi shows up at school wearing a face mask because he has a cold, Skye’s mortification for her cousin is almost palpable.

Clearly, I loved many little moments in this book and look forward to its release so that others can enjoy it, too!

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Start spreadin’ the news…

I’m in New York!

It’s about 100 degrees and humid out, which makes it feel like I’m literally in the jungle…which I guess I sort of am. Can’t wait to venture into the city tonight and experience all of the crowdedeness, rudeness, and black-hued fashion that’s been missing from my life for these past six months!

Anyway, in case you’re curious, here are a few of the items on my jam-packed agenda over the following week:

-Hear E.C. Myers read from Fair Coin at KGB Bar (tonight!)

-Meet my lovely editor Shauna at the Penguin offices

-Check out Matt Freeman’s latest play, Confess Your Bubble, at the Brick Theater in Williamsburg

-Take a virtual tour of China with outings to Yunnanese, Dongbei, and Cantonese restaurants

-Attend the wedding of two good friends (who started dating when we all worked together on the 2007 production of my play, PB&J–aw!)

-Take my sister to Coney Island (she’s never been!)

And then I take off for Boston, where even more fun awaits.

What are your plans for the next couple of weeks?

Finding Themo

I’ve recently become a little anxious about theme.

First there was this thread on a writer’s forum I belong to in which people were discussing where in a novel you’re supposed to introduce the theme. I sort of skimmed through the posts and then slunk away without participating, because, to be honest, it wasn’t something I had really thought about before.

In fact, I wasn’t even completely sure I understood what a theme was. Luckily, there’s a Mary Kole post for that! Simply defined, a theme is a Big Idea or Big Question that your book strives to explore…and according to Mary, every book should have one.

So all of that was kind of gnawing at my brain already…and then this week my friend Lisa wrote a terrific post on her blog called “Personal Mission Statements in Life and Writing,” which got me thinking about the whole issue even more. And, frankly, feeling a little concerned. I certainly hadn’t tried to insert a theme into Gladys Gatsby; did that mean that the book didn’t have one? And could my struggles with certain elements of my new WIP have to do with the fact that I didn’t have a theme for it, either?

Catch this theme if you can.

Thankfully, my writers’ group had a meeting scheduled this week, so I asked my two critique partners for their wisdom on theme. Did they have a Big Idea to explore in mind from page 1 of the first draft, or was it something that emerged on its own later, as the story got underway? Perhaps not surprisingly, I got two totally different answers: one of my CPs feels that she needs to know her theme to get her excited about writing a book in the first place, while for the other, the theme just emerges naturally as she drafts her stories.

But then, that CP told us about an exercise she had heard about once at a conference: If you’re not sure what the theme is in your own writing, take a look at your favorite movies. What do they have in common? What kinds of stories do they tell? Chances are, they share a theme that’s important to you, and that’s probably showing up in your own work.

Almost got a theme!

So that night, I examined my DVD shelf…and what do you know, I started to see a pattern!  School of Rock. Catch Me if You Can. Almost Famous. All stories of characters who take on a huge, seemingly unachievable goal—one that the powers-that-be in their worlds would surely put the kibosh on if only they knew about the protagonist’s secret plans—and, against all odds, manage to achieve it. (With plenty of funny hijinks ensuing along the way, of course.)

Shabam. That’s pretty much EXACTLY how things go down for Gladys. Standing up against the naysaying powers that be to take a shot at greatness…turns out my book does have a theme after all!

Jack Black will school you…IN THEME.

That’s definitely NOT the theme of my current project, though. But I have a whole other set of favorite movies—that tend to have international settings and usually some sort of forbidden love element, like The English Patient and The Sound of Music—that may shed some light on what theme I’m exploring in my WIP. I’m not quite sure what that is yet, but I think that it has something to do with loyalty, national identity, and self-sacrifice? Maybe by the time I finish a first draft, it’ll be clearer to me. 😀

So my question to you, fellow writers: Do you think consciously about theme from the first moments of brainstorming a new story, or is it something that reveals itself to you much later on in the process? Also, if you decide to try the “Favorite Film Analysis for Theme Identification” (um, FFATI?) method, feel free to share what you discover in the comments section!

Congratulations to our winner…

Jessica L.!

A copy of Never Back Down by Ernest Hebert will soon be yours. 😀

Many thanks to all those who stopped by to read the interview and share their thoughts, especially on the topic of The Great Gatsby (which I must say also happens to be one of my least favorite books). Glad to see that I’ve got some good company in that camp.

And thanks again to Ernie, of course!

Hooray for Ann!

Just a quick post to say CONGRATULATIONS to my good friend, fellow Dartmouth alum (yeah, class of ’01!), and awesome critique partner Ann Bedichek, who is now officially my agency-sibling, too! Hurrah!!

I knew from the moment I read Ann’s fabulous middle-grade novel, Scientastic SuperGirls, that she would not be unagented for long. It’s always nice to be proved right, especially when the agent snapping your friend up is the wonderful Tricia Lawrence at your very own beloved Erin Murphy Literary Agency. 😀

So pop on over to Ann’s blog to read her success story and congratulate her yourself! And here’s to seeing the SuperGirls on a shelf soon!

Required Reading: Interview with New Hampshire Novelist Ernest Hebert (and a giveaway of Never Back Down!)

Today, I’m thrilled and honored to welcome Ernest Hebert to the blog! Not only is he the author of several wonderful New-England-set novels–The Old American and The Dogs of March are two of my favorites–but he’s a professor of English & Creative Writing at Dartmouth College.

(Yup, that’s where I went to school. Yup, he was my professor. Yup, he read all the short stories I wrote at age 19 and even my first stab at a novel…and miraculously, he still wants to associate with me. This man is a gem!)

Ernie’s newest novel is Never Back Down, out now from David R. Godine, and it’s already garnering rave reviews. Publishers Weekly says:

Hebert’s homespun storytelling is a wonder to behold; the author’s measured prose, tender language, and universal themes of atonement and the bittersweet lessons of maturity shine through. (read the full review here)

Ernie graciously agreed to answer a few of my questions about his new book, traditional and self-publishing, genre-jumping, and writing in general. If you are a writer at any stage in your career, you want to read this interview–think of it as a free 10-minute master class. 🙂

And if you’re a reader, I’m sure you want to get your hands on a copy of Never Back Down! You can find out how to win a copy at the end of this post, or jump straight to purchasing one online at the following places:

Indiebound ** B&N ** Amazon ** Powells ** Book Depository ** BAM

On to the interview!

Tara Dairman: Can you tell us a bit about your new novel, Never Back Down?

Ernest Hebert: More than “a bit,” but here goes.

A few years back, I wrote a not-for-publication memoir for my children. I tried to be thorough and honest. The experience awakened in me memories from childhood and youth–growing up in a working-class family; speaking only French (not France French or Canadian French, but New Hampshire patois French) until I started Kindergarten; working in the textile mill (where my dad slaved for 45 years, 55 hours a week) for one summer and other jobs such as taxi driver and attendant in a psychiatric hospital; my first love; my relationship with various “best” friends; a one-night stand with a woman twice my age; my ambitions for a career as a baseball pitcher, crushed when I severely broke my wrist.

My life changed when I started college at the age of 23.

I asked myself what would my life have been like if I had never gone to college. That’s that question that launched Never Back Down, my first novel where I consciously used myself as a character. The result is a book that is half memoir, half invention. Isn’t that how most good novels get done? For inspiration and for a book structure I looked to The Life of a Simple Man by Emile Guillaumin, a book published in the early 1800’s that today probably would be categorized as creative nonfiction. It covers the life a French peasant. My goal with Never Back Down was to cover the life of a Franco-American working man, whose years spanned my own.

I set out to write an anti-Gatsby novel. The Great Gatsby is a good, but it’s a false idea to raise it to the level of the great American novel, because Fitzgerald ignores or demeans working people. Myrtle’s a slut, her husband’s a dope, Jay Gatsby’s father a bore, and Nick’s housekeeper doesn’t even have a name. If The Great Gatsby is a great American novel, then 90% of Americans of the so-called Jazz Age don’t matter. If anything, working people today matter less than ever–the people who build the skyscrapers, fix the cars, serve the burgers, and wipe the asses in the nursing homes. It’s been my mission in most of my work to write about these people who “don’t matter” without idealizing or demeaning them and without standing them up against the wall to represent some political ideology of the author. I’m especially interested in their interior lives, a territory ignored by most writers.

I named my protagonist Jacques “Jack” Landry after a name in my ancestry. Landry (like Hebert) is an name out of old Acadia, present day Nova Scotia. In 1755, the English and New Englanders forcibly removed some 20,000 Acadians from their land, where they had lived more than 100 years. (My North American ancestors go back to 1632 in Grand Pre, Nova Scotia.) Today we would call such a removal “ethnic cleansing.” The Acadians–the ones who didn’t escape into the woods–were dispersed throughout the New World, just dropped to fend for themselves. Most died, but a few found their way to present-day Louisiana, where they are known today as Cajuns. When I lived in New Orleans way back when, people would say, “Hebert [pronounced ‘Abare’], that’s a fine south Louisiana name.”

The Acadians’ story was symbolically retold by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow in his long poem, Evangeline. A young couple are separated on their wedding day by “Le Grand Derangement” and spend the rest of their lives looking for each other. Never Back Down follows that plot. Jack and his lover, Alouette Williams, a half-Cajun girl of 15 when they first meet, are separated after Jack makes a biiiig mistake. To punish himself for his mistake, Jack–a promising baseball pitcher who was raised Catholic–confesses his sin and with the complicity of a crazy priest, who reappears throughout the 50 years that the novel covers, Jack contrives his own penance. He renounces the idea of success (which for Jack is baseball) and dooms himself to a life of menial labor. How Jack finds meaning in such a life and eventually gets the girl (45+ years later) is the core of this novel.

TD: Last year, you released a science fiction novel, I Love u, as a Kindle ebook. What made you decide to go the self-publishing route for that project? Did you work with an editor before publishing it? And how would you say the experience turned out for you?

EH: I Love u is actually a kinda sequel to Mad Boys, which I published in 1993, a book I loved writing; it even won a prize. However, sales were poor and I actually got hate mail and sideways glances from fans of my New England “hick lit” novels. Publishers hate to see writers jump out of the genres that publishers designate for them. My agent could not find a publisher for I Love u at about the same time Amazon released the Kindle. I was one of the first adopters. Today I keep my library on my iPod, iPad, and Kindles that I have passed to my wife and daughters. Because I’m always reading five or six or even a dozen books at the same time, my work area and bedroom were littered with books. These days everything is at hand. So I’m a big fan of electronic reading. It’s no surprise, then, that I would jump into electronic publishing.

I paid a copy editor a hundred bucks to copy edit the book. I’ve always done graphics and it was great fun to design my own cover, though I did make a big mistake. You can’t read the subhead of I Love u in the thumbnail, which says “Adam and Eve for the Future or no Future at all.” I reformatted the book into HTML (formatting for websites) and the book sailed through Amazon’s vetting process on the first try. They pay 70% royalties. Try to get that from a book publisher. Later, I put Mad Boys on the Kindle. I’m so happy to see these companion books together.

Let me add the I have no pity for the big-time publishers. The major publishers today are parts of huge international conglomerates. They colluded with Apple to keep their prices artificially high. All they care about is making money. Those of us who write literary prose barely appear on their radar. I can understand how young writers such as yourself want to publish with a big house to make money, and more importantly to establish yourselves as published writers, but I’ve been through that. I have the luxury of owning all the electronic rights to my back list. What to do with it? I haven’t decided, but I know that as a so-called mid-list regional writer that I’m in a lot better position with the option of electronic publication than I would be without it.

TD: Throughout your career, you’ve written in a variety of fiction genres–historical, sci-fi, realism, magical realism. I know that your writing process usually consists of coming up with a main character first and a plot second, so at what point do you know what genre you’re working in? And do you have a favorite genre to write?

EH: I know the instant I start a book, or just conceive of a book in my head, which genre it’s going to be, but I wish I didn’t. Any thoughts about what the book will be like after it’s done gets in the way of its creation. I think writers should strive to remain or become naive at the same time that they’re developing Darwinian coping mechanism to create reputations as authors. In other words, writers have to split themselves in two. That necessary split factors into my views about what a novel should do: dramatize these splits in human experience. I think the great drama is conflict between the demands of the outside world and the inner life. Movies, poems, stage plays, short stories can hint at that inner life, but the novel is the best arena to display the inner life.

TD: One of my most vivid memories from my first creative writing class with you is that you took a whole session to teach your students about how fiction publishing “works”–what an agent does, how you go about submitting your work to publishers. My understanding is that most creative writing teachers don’t do that. Why do you think it’s important?

EH: I have two reasons for lecturing on publishing:

1) Most students have no clue so it’s good teaching to give them this brand new information. Writing prose fiction has business as well as artistic and entertainment components. Except for people who keep secret diaries, all writers want to publish their works. Us writers ought to tell them what we know.

2) The main reason is more subtle. I want my students to think of themselves as writers. Such a mindset will (I hope) inspire them, give them a measure of confidence and a feeling of fraternity with their fellow writers in the class. What I try to trigger with my lecture on publishing is a thought: So that’s how you do it; gee, I could be published. My goal is less to teach writing than to empower students to teach themselves the craft.


Thank you so much, Ernie, for sharing your hard-earned wisdom–both back in your classes in the early 2000’s, and today. 😀

Also, I’m so excited about the release of Never Back Down that I’m going to give a copy away to one lucky commenter! (In fact, I’m probably going to see Ernie during my east coast trip in July, so if you’re willing to wait that long, it can even be an autographed copy.)

So please share your thoughts below, and I’ll draw a winner randomly next week. You have until midnight, EST, on Wednesday, June 6, to enter. And if you Tweet or Facebook about this interview/giveaway and include the link in your comment, I’ll give you an extra entry!


Hello, folks! Just a quick post to say that you can find me over at Mindy McGinnis’s blog today, sharing a bit about the experience of going “on submission” to editors and coming out the other end with a book deal for Gladys Gatsby. Here’s the link:

Debut Submission Experience with World Traveler Tara Dairman

I’ve also got a wisdom-filled interview coming for you later this week with the wonderful author–and my college professor of creative writing!–Ernest Hebert. So you’ll definitely want to pop back over here for that.

Happy Tuesday!

May Days

It’s been a busy few weeks. Let’s play catch-up!

I now have an author page on Facebook. Unlike on this blog, I actually post there in a timely manner about writerly things that are going on in my life (like interviews or Gladys book news), so if you’d rather find out about that stuff as it’s happening rather than weeks after the fact, you can “like” me there. 😀

For instance, if you were following that page, you would have seen that on May 11, along with my agent (the excellent Ammi-Joan Paquette) I got interviewed by the also-excellent Krista at Mother.Write.(Repeat.). I share my query letter, and Joan and I both talk about the process that brought us together.

I also got invited by Krista, by buddy Monica BW, and the other organizers (Cupid and Brenda) of “The Writer’s Voice” to be the “expert commenter” on all 44 entries in the agent-seeking competition. Yee-haw! Since I connected with my agent through a similar contest, I was definitely excited to help out. Now, I may not be a real expert on anything other than comma placement, but that’s not going to stop me from sharing my two cents on all of the entered queries and first pages. Agents are voting today, and my comments go up on all the blogs tomorrow.

Andy and I welcomed our first official houseguest to Colorado, and spent an awesome week with our world-traveling buddy Ray. Isn’t it great how a visitor gives you the impetus you need to visit all sorts of cool places in your area that you hadn’t been to before? We hit Rocky Mountain National Park…

I live in the most beautiful state!

Great Sand Dunes National Park…

A huge sandbox at the foot of the Rockies. What could be better?

…and made much-needed repeat visits to the Flatirons and the Celestial Seasonings Tea Factory (where they will seriously let you sample as much free tea as you can drink).

Sleepytime Bear says “Drink More Tea!”

Our finest achievement, though, was thoroughly addicting our previously board-game-apathetic friend to two of our favorites, Ticket to Ride Europe and Settlers of Catan. Pretty sure he’s counting coal, bricks, wood, and wheat in his sleep now as well as sheep. 😀

And then, near the end of his stay, Ray brought us the luck of the Irish, and Andy got a job. Hurrah!! This, however, necessitated us giving up our carless lifestyle so he could actually get to the office. I don’t love driving and am not a great fan of most cars…except for this teeny-tiny one I first spotted during my studies in France in 1999. When it finally arrived in the USA in 2007, I did a happy dance every time I saw one on the road. And now (this still blows my mind), we own one!!

Beep, beep!

Yup, 2012 definitely seems to be the year that all of my dreams are coming true. 😀

So how has May been treating you?

The adventure continues!

So, two things are happening today. First of all, it’s my debut blog post over at EMU’s Debuts, which is a group blog featuring first-time authors represented by my agency, Erin Murphy Lit. If you’re at all curious about what goes on between the moment you sell your book and the moment it hits the shelves (heck, I sure am!), you’ll want to follow us over there.

My first post is a heartbreaking tale of agony and woe (um, not really) entitled “A Sob/Sub Story.”

And secondly, we have winners from the Choose Your Own Adventure Book Giveaway!

Random.org has randomly decided that the winner of the Putnam book of her choice is:

Parker Peevyhouse! 🙂

And the winner of her choice of EMLA book is:

Sarvenaz Tash! 🙂

Hooray! Confetti! Cupcakes! Emoticons!   🙂 🙂

Thanks to everyone who entered, and I hope that you’ll check out some of those books on your own even if you didn’t win a copy. I’m also planning to do a few more interviews and giveaways in the coming months, so stay tuned for those!